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She Wanted none of ot anymore. Not her family, not her lover

She Wanted none of ot anymore. Not her family, not her lover

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The story opens with a bang—literally. A door slams open, and the news drops like a bomb: “Olivia’s in trouble.”

The once–joyful proposal scene turns cold in an instant. Balloons, flowers, and laughter fade as chaos erupts. Lucas Wright, who just moments ago was down on one knee proposing to his long-time girlfriend Natasha, bolts for the door. His childhood sweetheart, the delicate and adored Olivia Sutton, has been in a car accident—and nothing else matters anymore.

Natasha stands frozen in the corner, her heart shattering in silence. She doesn’t even get the chance to say “yes.” Instead, she’s left watching the man she loves run straight into another woman’s arms… again.

For years, she’s been living in Olivia’s shadow—her foster sister, her rival, and the one person Lucas would drop everything for. The golden girl everyone loves versus the “troublemaker” everyone blames. Natasha has always been painted as the villain, no matter what she does.

But this time, something inside her breaks. She’s calm, cold, and done playing the victim.

When Lucas tries to soothe her with his usual words—“Be good, Natasha”—she doesn’t cry or beg. She looks him straight in the eyes and says, “If you walk out that door tonight, we’re through.”

He hesitates for a moment… then leaves anyway.

The heartbreak is complete.

Even as her best friend Sadie explodes with fury—accusing Lucas of always running to Olivia’s rescue and calling out the hypocrisy of everyone who worships her—Natasha remains composed. She’s past tears now. Watching Lucas disappear into the night feels like watching years of love crumble to dust. She knows deep down: this time, there’s no going back.

And then, as if to twist the knife deeper, her phone buzzes with a message that says it all:
[You lost.]

It’s from Olivia.


🔥 The Past That Haunts Her:

The next chapter flashes back to three days earlier. Olivia had shown up unannounced, that same angelic smile masking the venom in her voice.

“Why does a trainwreck like you get to be happy, Natasha?”
“Let’s make a bet. Your proposal? It’s going to crash and burn in three days.”

Olivia’s prediction comes true, and Natasha realizes it wasn’t fate—it was sabotage.
It always is.

Years ago, Natasha was accused of faking a kidnapping to steal attention from Olivia’s medical emergency. Everyone turned on her—her foster parents, her friends, even Lucas. Since then, she’s been branded as a liar, manipulator, and troublemaker. No one ever believed her side of the story. No one except Sadie.

That night, alone after the failed proposal, Natasha takes a walk to clear her head. But fate—or Olivia’s scheming—has one more blow waiting. She notices she’s being followed. Several men trail her through the dark streets.

Panicked, she calls Lucas using the emergency contact he set up years ago. He answers—but instead of helping, he scolds her.

“Natasha, I can’t do this tonight. Quit messing with me.”

Her mother overhears and snaps.

“Stop causing trouble, Natasha! Olivia’s in the hospital, and you’re making up lies again?”

And then they hang up on her.

Heartbroken and alone, Natasha realizes she can’t count on anyone—not her family, not Lucas, not anyone.

But she isn’t the weak girl they think she is anymore. When the men close in, she fights back with every ounce of strength she has. Years of Muay Thai training pay off. Fifteen minutes later, her attackers are lying on the ground—broken, groaning, defeated.

Then, just as exhaustion takes over, a shadow steps out from the dark. A tall figure with a wicked smile and eyes that gleam with danger.

“Well, hell. Who’s this little scrapper?”

The scene fades to black.


💫 Review:

“You Lost” is a storm of emotions—betrayal, manipulation, heartbreak, and a spark of revenge that’s just waiting to ignite. The author sets up a beautifully tragic love triangle where love isn’t pure—it’s poisoned by obsession, favoritism, and lies.

At the heart of it all stands Natasha, a misunderstood heroine whose pain is both raw and dignified. She’s been branded a villain for years, but this story finally lets readers see the truth: she’s the one who’s been wronged over and over. Despite being labeled “ungrateful” and “nasty,” Natasha’s inner strength, calm composure, and refusal to beg for love make her one of the most compelling female leads in recent romance fiction.

Lucas Wright, on the other hand, represents every man who takes loyalty for granted. He loves Natasha, but never enough to stand by her when it matters. His blindness to Olivia’s manipulative games makes him both tragic and infuriating.

And Olivia Sutton—the so-called angel—shines as a perfectly crafted antagonist. Beautiful, delicate, and dangerously clever, she hides her cruelty behind a mask of innocence. Her final text, “You lost,” is chilling—a declaration of victory in a game only she knows the rules to.

The writing is crisp and cinematic. Each chapter feels like a movie scene: the crashing door, the silent heartbreak, the eerie text message. The pacing is tight, the dialogue sharp, and the emotions intense. Readers can practically feel Natasha’s rage simmering beneath her cool exterior.

By the end of Chapter 2, the tone shifts subtly from heartbreak to suspense. The attack scene marks Natasha’s transformation—from heartbroken lover to fighter. The mysterious man who appears at the end hints that her story is about to take a darker, more dangerous turn. Perhaps revenge isn’t far behind.


✨ Highlights:

  • Strong Female Lead: Natasha isn’t a damsel in distress—she’s a survivor.

  • Emotional Depth: The relationships are layered and painfully realistic.

  • Themes: Betrayal, favoritism, emotional neglect, redemption, and self-worth.

  • Perfect Hook: The story ends its setup phase with a thrilling cliffhanger, pulling readers into what promises to be a rollercoaster of revenge and renewal.


🌹 Verdict:

Rating: 9/10

“You Lost” is an emotionally charged start to a saga of love turned toxic and pain turned power. It’s perfect for readers who crave heart-wrenching drama, slow-burn revenge, and strong women who rise from the ashes.

In one line:

She lost the man she loved… but she’s about to win the war she never asked for. 💔🔥


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